John and the group liked these ideas better. They said it was working more successfully without the 3D element which I agree with. However he still wants me to push it further and take more risks with it. The text may still be a little too large.
John wants me to try the text smaller. I think the elongated version has more impact and there is still enough negative space. I prefer the version on the right, both sides are solid as you have the "i" to the left and the text alined right with rag left.
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